this is to the pchf user that sent me a message about a book their girlfriend wrote called asylum. i hope you find this thread. sorry i couldnt reply properly, for some reason it says my inbox is empty.
so my verdict is: no good
i didnt think it was as deep and thoughtful as you meant it to be. it seemed like you were just describing stuff. he did this and then that. not much about his musings and therefore i felt it was pretty boring. i got lost about who was talking when. not very clear. i only read the first 2 chapters but it was just so full of details about what they did, stuff like feeding Rex. zzzzzzz. sorry

Hi there jpph,

I wish you had seen this thread first...

http://www.pchelpforum.com/site-anno...pam-today.html

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same happened to me. still i think the stuff is not bad but it needs work. not sure this feedback is passed on as it's spam. good luck with the novel whoever you are, it could work with a commercial publisher but it needs a big rewrite.