Hi All, Just rebuilt my website can you see any problems with it I have only built 3 it looks ok to me but I'm pretty new at this . If you find any problems with it please let me know. MPV Mp4 Mp3 Player's Digital Camera's World Wide Delivery

Layout is much better

The menu items at the top look a bit wierd to me however...using firefox 2, and they seem like they're stuck in 16colour....might just be my work computer being left on for about 2 months.

First of all, I can tell that a LOT of work went into creating both of these sites. Generally speaking I think they are both above average, but since you are looking for critical input here goes:

• Neither site looks as if it were professionally designed to me, but both look as though they were done by a knowledgable amateur.
• There is a lot of visual overload. Just too much information on each page, and I suspect you'll have a high rate of site abandonment because navigability is a problem with information overload.
• May be you shall like my suggestion that its good if you should visit the site of very popular Web Designing Company-
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Website rebuild take 3. yes that's right rebuild 3, this time I have changed the layout completely and tried to give it a more professional look. I also added a character to the main page and dvd/cd page welcoming visitors the voice is a bit scratchy though but it is the best I could get it with free software . There is so many thing you can do which make it hard to decide on a final build of the website. some more suggestions on how to improve the look of my website would be much appreciated. So please post them . I want to have a good final build so I can leave the website alone so it will get index better buy the directories spiders.

Not bad...
I like the layout - but i personally think the voice is tacky...and i always get irritated when i hear sounds on a website unless i'm expecting it

I also don't have speakers, i only use headphones - and that's when i'm listening to music or playing a game

I'd personally scratch the voice/video girl thing...and go with just a quick synopsis.

Also - on a quick note...I think that top banner is a bit...low quality...it's almost out of place...you could get that sitting a bit better...better quality...better something...i can't think of it atm, but it...needs...something


Sorry for keep shooting some ideas down for ya matt, just keeping it honest

I agree

+ it is an evaluation copy - which doesnt look to professional to be honest.

thank for the tips guy's. I was unsure about the video but now looking at the comments I can see that it could be quiet annoying so I'm going to remove it do you have any Ideas of what to replace it with I could put a picture the or maybe a custom google search for music related stuff? I will cleanup the top banner too . Please don't hesitate on commenting on other things to you don't have to be to kind I want my website to be the best I can make it. So far the advice has been very helpfull. if any other members could comment it would be great you don't have to be a web designer just have a look and tell me what you like/dislike so I can Improve my site